Journey's End Comments
Non-Fiction
Your third story is definitely my favorite. I thought the dialogue was very good. Got a kick out of the humor and thought you had a very good sense of when to end a chapter and switch characters to create a cliffhanger. Thumbs up! :) Ben Brockport, NY
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