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| This is a fantastic story! In my estimation, each
of your stories gets better and better. It was interesting the way you
used time travel and timelines as the main theme coupled with the discussions
among the main characters about what would happen if the second assassination
took place. I don’t know how you managed to keep the time travel
and timeline discussions and explanations straight through many pages.
I would have gotten tangled up in my shorts trying to keep the dialogue
and concepts straight and technically reasonable. You also did a great
job of individual characters asking pertinent questions and interjecting
new ideas into the discussion to solve the problem of what to do. It was
also neat the way you divided up the storyline towards the book’s
end involving the various ships and their crews. I don’t mean to
be comical, but I had to chuckle with all the different crew members skulking
around at the same time in cloaking body suits, to stop anyone trying
to stop the first assassination. It was almost Keystone Cops. You also
did a good job of twisting the story by solving the various problems associated
with the assassination attempts. The use of time travel and timelines
would have made a good story by themselves, but you made it so much more
interesting by adding the sub plots involving the woman from the future,
the various crews, and the timeline complexities. Great story!! Wade S.
Jacksonville, TX |
| Reply to Wade - Again, thanks for your comments.
Much appreciated. I had a feeling you'd like this story at least as well
as "The Mission." I believe I forgot to say thanks for passing
on the word about my works. Appeciate that. Once again, thanks for your
nice words - always great to know someone likes what I write. Neil |
| Hi Neil - I finished "Assassin's Time Out
of Time" yesterday and enjoyed it a lot. Boy, the intricacies of
time travel and everyone participating was great. And so glad they were
able to help the Vorsh out of their predicament on their own. Thanks for
the writing and looking forward to your next work of art. I'll keep letting
people know about your books. Vidal |
| Reply to Vidal - Thanks for your comments, Vidal.
I had a bugger of a time working out all the implications of time travel,
etc., but I believe I succeeded. Glad to hear you liked the story. I'm
working on another one, but have no idea yet if it will get finished.
Thanks again! Neil |
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